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Friday, May 12, 2017

Explanation writing

Explanation writing

Would you like to know why we drink water, I will give you many facts as to why we should drink water.

Water helps you to concentrate while driving and studying. Water contains oxygen and hydrogen. What is oxygen  a ,colourless odourless reactive gas, the chemical element of atomic number 8 and the life-supporting component of the air. You're probably wondering what hydrogen means, hydrogen means a colourless, odourless, highly flammable gas, the chemical element.

Drinking water keeps you healthy  Drinking enough water everyday can help reduce heart disease and cancer. Water helps flush toxins out of your body, and the fewer toxins that come into contact with your  bladder, and other organs, the less chance of you getting sick. Water can wash and clean in and outside of your body. Water can also moisturize your skin and you can lose weight so by drinking water can do a lot of things.

If you do not drink water you will become sick and prevent constipation water can also replace lost fluids during exercise.The average person could live without food for nearly a month, but we could only survive about one week without water that’s how essential water is to human life.

Water makes up approximately 70% of a human’s body weight but don't stop drinking water to lose weight.Without water, your body would stop working properly. Water makes up more than half of your body weight, and a person can't survive for more than a few days without it. Why? Your body has lots of important jobs and it needs water to do many of them. For instance, your blood, which contains a lot of water, carries oxygen to all the cells of your body. Without oxygen, those tiny cells would die and your body would stop working.

I trust that I have given you many facts beyond doubt as to why we drink water.


2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Leilah. Great that you shared your writing. I like the way you separated your ideas into different paragraphs. I did not see what purpose hydrogen serves in water and how it helps the body.

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  2. Hi leilah. Nice to see your explanation writing hopefully it would convince someone one day

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